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گفت از آن درد که درمان نپذیرد گله نیست

تاریخ:دوشنبه 19 فروردین 1392-09:35


ای بیابانزده!!
            این ناله ی باد است
                   نه این ولوله نیست
               این بیابان که محل گذر قافله نیست

درو دیوار ترک خورده به افتادگی عادت دارند
توی ویرانه دگر واهمه از زلزله نیست

گفتم از هستی بی حاصل خود بیزارم
گفت از آن درد که درمان نپذیرد گله نیست

بودنت حاصل عصیان هزاران نفر است
گنه زادن تو گردن یک قابله نیست

گفتم این مرد پریشانی دوزخ دارد
گفت خوش باش جهانی پس از این مرحله نیست

*

واژه ها از غم دوریت پریشان شده اند
شعر میجوشد از این سینه ولی حوصله نیست

گفتم انگار به دیدار تو امیدی نیست
گفت احسنت همانطور که گفتی بله نیست

مرگ یک لحظه ی تلخ است ولی معتقدم
بدتر از تلخی ویرانگر این فاصله نیست

وقتی امید به دیدار نباشد دیگر
درجهان بود و نبود من و تو مسئله نیست

                                                
                                    *بودن یا نبودن مسئله اینست
                                                                                               شکسپیر



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سه شنبه 31 اردیبهشت 1392 18:24
سلام
شعر خوبتونو خوندم
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شنبه 28 اردیبهشت 1392 15:39
حتی الآن که خوندم هم فقط میتونم بگم قشنگه. دستتون درد نکنه.
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پنجشنبه 26 اردیبهشت 1392 20:56
سلام
شعر خوب و قشنگی بود
حس میکنم سبک خودتون رو دارید پیدا میکنید

وقتی بیت
در و دیوار ترک خورده به افتلدگی عادت دارند ....توی ویرانه دگر واهمه از زلزله نیست رو خوندم
ناخودآگاه یاد این بیتتون افتادم که
ای برگهای ریخته در فصل پاییز .... مردن که دیگر انقدر خش خش ندارد
یه جورایی این دو تا بنظرم شبیه اومد

راستی ممنون که سر زده بودید به وبلاگ .... ما هنوز سیرجان هستام و چند وقت پیش آقای کرمانی رو هم اتفاقی دیدم
باز هم ممنون و موفق باشید
رضا امیرزاده
چهارشنبه 25 اردیبهشت 1392 14:37
سلام
توی این مصرع
گفت احسنت همانطور که گفتی بله نیست
فقط با کلمه ها وزن رو پر کردی
شبنم.ن
سه شنبه 24 اردیبهشت 1392 20:56

سلام آقای عمادآبادی عزیز

یه دنیا ممنونم از حضورتون و اینکه غزلم رو نقد کردین

متشکرم
بعدا میام و راجع به غزلتون نظر میدم
موفق باشین و سربلند
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سه شنبه 24 اردیبهشت 1392 15:35
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شنبه 21 اردیبهشت 1392 21:10
سلام غزل خوش وزن و پر معنایی هست لذت بردم.
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